To conduct my proposal feedback I sat down with my focus group and brainstormed some ideas towards my proposal. I looked at both the benefits and constraints. It was evident that my storyline as a whole if it works will be something that will appear as interesting, whilst my ideas are in enough depth. Although, I need to go through and mention the institutional information for the video.
The Producer/ Director- Me: Katie Snook as then I can make the video look like how I have it in my head.
One think I think I’ve understood is how to appeal to my target audience.